Friday, June 17, 2011

THE BEST STORY EVER: FIELD TRIP BY TOMMY COKER

A few weeks (yes weeks, don't judge!) after Tommy's last day at school I was cleaning out his back pack and came across this story he had written. I got the biggest kick out of it and I have had it hanging in my nail polish room. I thought you guys might like it too, so I decided to scan it in and share with all. The picture he drew went with the story and he did a really good job on that too.

Tommy loves to hear me read your comments to him, so if you have time and would like to leave him a few words, I know he would love it :)

(CLICK TO ENLARGE if it's to small on your screen)


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12 comments:

  1. BrandiJune 17, 2011 at 11:16 AM

    I love Little's story. I would like him to write me a story all my own :)

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  2. AdriannaJune 17, 2011 at 11:23 AM

    Aww, so cute! I love the illustration.

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  3. MightyLambchopJune 17, 2011 at 11:24 AM

    I love the stories little ones write. They are the best!
    Thanks for sharing this and and I hope Little has a great summer!

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  4. zehavaJune 17, 2011 at 11:30 AM

    best story ever. with words of wisdom thrown in "let's stop fighting before someone gets hurt" and "free parking!". your little one is a smart smart kid :D

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  5. Natalia AJune 17, 2011 at 12:03 PM

    Wow! such a great story I'm stunned how well he writes and draws for a child of his age!

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  6. Icequeen81June 17, 2011 at 12:13 PM

    sweet story :) cute painting :)

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  7. StilettoJune 17, 2011 at 12:42 PM

    Tommy, That was a great story! And the illustrations were fantastic! Make sure to keep on writing cause you are VERY good!!!

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  8. DesertNails8June 17, 2011 at 1:43 PM

    Tommy - I love the drawing!

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  9. CherylJune 18, 2011 at 10:27 PM

    this is little thanks. Im glad you like it.I write some more.

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  10. summertimeJune 19, 2011 at 2:11 PM

    That's a great field trip story Little. Great job! I'm happy to know that even though they got separated, they ended up finding each other again. Great picture too! Thanks for sharing.

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  11. AnonymousJune 20, 2011 at 12:57 PM

    Love his artwork! His drawing of the bus looks so much better than mine when I was his age!

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  12. LucyJune 23, 2011 at 3:29 PM

    Great drawing and love his use of color! The story was great! Free parking just cracked me up! Also someone will get hurt was a great line also. You've got a great budding artist and writer there.

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